How To Video Evaluation

How to Video Evaluation

The feedback that I got from some of the people who viewed my video was positive and taken into consideration. Most people liked the idea that was shown in the video, the others were happy with how I added humor into the video.

In my opinion I think the whole idea I came up with was a good idea and I think it will actually help people who would watch the video and want to learn from it. I am happy for adding humor in the video so that the video wasn’t just dull and boring. Also after every video I was able to add a tip after so that people wouldn’t get confused if they couldn’t understand the scenarios. I also like that how I drew my audience in at the beginning with the music choice and the first footage introducing the scene. The editing was decent I can tell that I am slowly improving and it made the video flow very well. However, I am not happy about the level of sound in the video because in some of the scenarios you couldn’t really hear what was said because if the background noise being louder than the voices, so you couldn’t really hear what was being said.  

I think I could have improved the amount of background noise in the video because it over took the characters voices in the video so you couldn’t really hear anything. I could have improved this by recording in a quieter environment to get a good result, or get a mic above the camera so that it can be able to capture the characters voices more instead of the background noise. I also think that I should have used an instrumental instead of the original song which could have made it better.

In the future when I record something similar I will take my time and think thoroughly on the location to film and see if there are a lot of background noise or use the proper equipment to record this to make it better. Moreover, I feel like if I would make it longer it would have been more effective than it already is.

How To video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CURZMpdlTbU

How To Script

How To Move A Girl/How To Not Move To A Girl (Script)

Scene 1

The scene opens up with Lloyd on his phone and a female walking past and Lloyd tries to grab her attention.

Lloyd: ayy come here let me chat to you quick

Female: EW don’t talk to me

Lloyd looks at her walk off then shakes his head

Lloyd: have you ever tried to speak to a girl and she does what she did, okay maybe you’re doing it wrong I’m going to show you 2 ways how to do it and 2 ways how not to do it. Pay attention cause you may learn something from this.

The scene then ends of with the scene blacking out and text saying “pay attention”

Scene 2

The scene opens up with Lloyd on the phone outside of college then sees a beautiful girl and then he goes and tries to approach her.

Lloyd: Oi put your number on my phone and don’t make my day long (pulls out phone)

Female: I’ve got a man

Lloyd:  So your man don’t allow you to have male friends

The girl gets up and gives Lloyd a dirty look then walks off

Lloyd: You’re clapped anyways

The scene then blacks out giving us the first tip of how not to approach a girl

Scene 3

The scene opens up with a boy leaning on a wall in a subway on his phones he then sees a girl and tries to approach her

Philip: Yeah Yeah let me chat to you innit

Female: EW who are you, I’ve got a man

Philip: Let me chat to you init (girl pushes him and walks off) Your clapped anyway

The scene then blacks out with a second tip on how to not approach a girl

Scene 4

How to move to a girl

The scene opens up with a car park scene showing a female walking from her car to her destination while Philip tries to approach her

Philip: Excuse me can I talk to you

Female: Yeah sure you can

Philip: What you doing here

Female: Just trying to get some things you

Philip: Oh okay I hear, I’m just on my way home, can I have your number please

Female: Yeah sure

Hands over his phone, she then puts her number on there

Philip: Thanks I will call you

Female: Alright

They both walk off, scene ends and the first tip appears

Scene 4

The scene opens up with Lloyd walking and then spots female then talks to her.

Lloyd: Excuse me is anyone sitting her

Female: No

Lloyd then takes a seat

Lloyd: so what you doing today

Female: just waiting for my friend really, you

Lloyd: I’m just here chilling

Female oh okay

Lloyd: you look nice I’m feeling your style

Female: Haha

 thank you

Lloyd: No worries, can I get your number

Female: Yeah sure

Pulls out phone, she then stores her number on his phone

Lloyd: I will call you yeah

Female: Alright

Lloyd walks off and gives a cheeky wink to the camera, the scene blacks out then there last is a finale tip on how to talk to a girl.

How To Video Story Board

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